黑天鹅之歌攻略:帮忙改一句话

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i feel the knowledge I learned in undergraduate course is not engough to make me a aggressive person.
有语病吗?
除了a 改成 an还有其他的吗?

i feel the knowledge I learned in undergraduate course is not engough to make me a aggressive person.

I feel that the knowledge I obtained during my undergraduate years is not enough to make me an aggresive person.
也可考虑换一种说法:The knowledge I have grasped did not prepare me well enough for the world。

learn knowledge不合适

engough???
enough吧。。。

a-an
engough-enough
i-I

feel-find

feel 要改成过去式

course是可数名词,要不加冠词,要不改成复数
去掉a 和person,aggressive做宾补,要不句子成分不对,或者改成have me become an...
根据语境,考虑句子是否改成过去时,如果改,主,从句时态要一致