龙脊梯田最佳季节:有谁帮忙看下有没有语法错误?

I am very happy (that I)can write the letter to you (to)express [me like](my love) to you.
Because (the movie) You develop(ed) [the movie]{去掉} [really was](was really) [so]{去掉}good.I 'm your super movie fan!
But i want to know something about you in the Real world
we may exchange [respective](our different) national culture,
[Each one](every) [happy matter](happiness) and the humorous matter or feels bad matter or hobby and so on.In brief,I will support you forever.
I [want to] (will) pray for [heavenly blessing ]{去掉}you
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修改后如下:
I am very happy that I can write the letter to express my love to you.
Because the movie You developed was really good.I 'm your super movie fan!
But I want to know something about you in the Real world .
we may exchange our different national culture,
every happiness and the humorous matter or feels bad matter or hobby and so on.In brief,I will support you forever.
I would pray for you.

漏洞百出。。。。。
并且看不大懂这种英语！

有.......第一句就有了

有.......第一句就有了