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I was ill before the Newyears coming.I had a headachea and whole body felt wobbly and rough.At begining I think that's a minor ailments,then i ate some medicine to relieve the painful.It seems that many things in our lives go by contrary.My illness grew worse in the evening,i had a fever,so i had to go to see a doctor.Finally,i received injection for illness.During these days I was not interested in everything aroud me.
Actually, i was prone to minor ailments.It attributes to lack of doing exercies.
In good health,a student can absorb more knowledge and solve more complex problems.People with good health can do work with full confidence.In a word, nothing is more valuable than health .
After i got well , as for me regular exercises is benefit to my health a lot and it'll trengthen my body.

I was ill before the Newyears coming.
- I was ill before the New Year came.

I had a headachea and whole body felt wobbly and rough.
-I had a headache and my whole body felt wobbly and rough.

At begining I think that's a minor ailments,then i ate some medicine to relieve the painful.
-At the beginning I thought it was a minor ailment, then I took some medicine to relieve the pain.

It seems that many things in our lives go by contrary.
-It seems that many things in our lives go to the contrary.

My illness grew worse in the evening,i had a fever,so i had to go to see a doctor.
-My illness became worse in the evening, and I had a fever, so I had to go to see a doctor.

During these days I was not interested in everything aroud me.
-During those days I was not interested in anything else aroud me.

Actually, i was prone to minor ailments.
-Actually, i am easy to catch minor ailments.

It attributes to lack of doing exercies.
-It attributes to the lack of exercises.

In good health,a student can absorb more knowledge and solve more complex problems.
-If/when in good health, ...

People with good health can do work with full confidence.
-People in good health...adequete confidence.

After i got well , as for me regular exercises is benefit to my health a lot and it'll trengthen my body.
-After I recovered, I realised that regular exercise may benefit a lot to my health and it makes my body stronger.