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White Lion ------- Lady of the Valley
白狮乐队------------山谷中的女士
lady of the valley山谷中的女士
can you hear me cry in the sillness of the night你能在黑夜的边缘听见我的哭泣吗？
I have lost my brother in the fights of the war我在战争的打斗中失去了兄弟
and my heart has broken down我的心已经破败
In the night I cry but no one seems to hear在夜晚我哭泣 但似乎没人能够听见
I step into the light but all I feel is fear我步入光芒 但我感受到的惟有恐惧
lady of the valley山谷中的女士
can you bring him back to the days when we were kids你能把他带回我们童年时吗
once we were together我们曾经在一起
we stood young and strong我们仍然年轻力壮
now it seems so long ago现在一切似乎发生在很久以前
the golden key is at the end of the chain金色的钥匙在锁链的末端
how it hurts ohh lady free me from this pain
in the night I cry to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女士哭泣
cause I'll die without the lady of the valley因为没有她我会死去
in the night I call to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女士哭泣
on my knees I fall before the lady of the valley
in the valley lies the treasure山谷中静埋着宝藏
and the lady guards it well女士引导着它
he who bears all the pressure他承担这所有的压迫
is the one to break the spell打破了轮流
there's a sign that I've followed有一个我跟随的记号
and it has led me to your seat它将我带到你的座位
I have brought my fallen brother我带走逝去的兄弟
and I've laid him, yes I've laid him我放下了他
at your feet在你脚下
in the night I cry to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女士哭泣
cause I'll die without the lady of the valley因为没有她我会死去
in the night I call to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女士哭泣
on my knees I fall before the lady of the valley
各位朋友,你们都改得太好了.
女孩,在那山谷
是否在夜的边界听到我的哭诉
我在战争中失去了手足
心也已经破碎无助
在夜里,无人理睬我的痛哭
恐惧不会消失,即使站在光明处
女孩,在那山谷
能否把他带回我们曾经的童年国度
曾经如影随形
曾经强壮年轻
但那似乎遥远如梦境
White Lion ------- Lady of the Valley
白狮乐队------------山谷中的女人
lady of the valley山谷中的女人
can you hear me cry in the sillness of the night你是否能在黑夜的边缘听见我的哭泣？
I have lost my brother in the fights of the war我在战争的打斗中失去了兄弟
and my heart has broken down我的心已经麻痹
In the night I cry but no one seems to hear在夜晚我哭泣 但似乎没人能够听见
I step into the light but all I feel is fear我步入光芒 但我感受到的惟有恐慌
lady of the valley山谷中的女人
can you bring him back to the days when we were kids你能否把他带回我们童年
once we were together我们曾经相随
we stood young and strong我们仍然年轻力壮
now it seems so long ago现在一切似乎发生在很久以前
the golden key is at the end of the chain金色的钥匙在锁链的末端
how it hurts ohh lady free me from this pain
in the night I cry to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女人哭泣
cause I'll die without the lady of the valley因为没有她我会死去
in the night I call to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女人哭泣
on my knees I fall before the lady of the valley
in the valley lies the treasure山谷中静埋着宝藏
and the lady guards it well女人引导着它
he who bears all the pressure他承担这所有的压迫
is the one to break the spell打破了轮流
there's a sign that I've followed有一个我跟随的记号
and it has led me to your seat它将我带到你的座位
I have brought my fallen brother我带走逝去的兄弟
and I've laid him, yes I've laid him我放下了他
at your feet在你脚下
in the night I cry to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女人哭泣
cause I'll die without the lady of the valley因为没有她我会死去
in the night I call to the lady of the valley在夜晚中我对山谷中的女人哭泣
on my knees I fall before the lady of the valley
In the night I cry but no one seems to hear黑暗中没人听到我的哭泣
I step into the light but all I feel is fear光明里我所感受的惟有恐惧
____ 这段话这样翻译比较有力.翻译不需要每个词都按原来的翻,最重要的是把意境表达出来.
can you bring him back to the days when we were kids你能否把他带回我们童年
once we were together我们曾经相随
we stood young and strong我们仍然年轻力壮
now it seems so long ago现在一切似乎发生在很久以前
改成,
你能把他带回我们的童年时光吗
那时形影不离
那时我们并肩作战,年轻力壮
但现在这一切似乎早已飘逝
he who bears all the pressure他承担这所有的压迫
is the one to break the spell打破了轮流
这个改成
她说,承受住所有的压迫
就注定能打破魔咒