小野彰贤:汉译英下面一句话

Everything is going well now for my work, and everything is OK. However, I am spending all my spare time to take part in a study via correspondence, so I look a bit busy now.

业余时间:英语没有我们说的业余时间，课本上学到的spare time, leisure time是很中国式的说法。所谓的业余时间，其实就是after work的时间。
函授学习：learning program。这个应该是英语和汉语最接近的概念了。
显得有些忙:汉语这样说没问题，可是英语是个逻辑性很强的语言，你说现在忙，实际是包含了以前不忙的意思，有一个比较级在里边，所以用busier.
我给出的翻译：
The job is going on pretty well for me, so is everything else. Just that I attend a learning program after work, I am a little bit busier than before.

I am getting on quite well with everything including my job.

And I am a bit busy as I have taken a correspondence course on which I spend my free time.

I am doing fine in my job and everything is all right. I am a little engaged these days for the part-time schooling.

I'm fine in my work now. And everything is ok. Just take a course in my free time, so it seems like a little busy.

I work to come right now, everythings are all very good.Just make use of amateur time to attend a to teach by correspondence a study now, so seem to be some favour.