中科新闻网孤独之旅优秀课件:英文厉害的朋友请帮我翻译一下~《！（有积分）
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谢谢。。?↓
（我能请你写几句鼓励我的话吗？一直以来，我都很想学好英文，因为我特别喜欢英文歌，但是我的英文成绩总是很差，所以，我希望得到你的鼓励和祝福，并签上你的名字，我会将此作为留念，可以吗？）
晕了
不知道选哪个、好
楼上写的有些问题：
1）for... I always wanted...时态错误。
2）marks for English介词不对。
3）hear...encouragement and inspiration有两个搭配错误。
4）从For a long time到autogragh居然是一句话！连接手段是：...because,...but...so...and...(后面是问句！）
5）起他的就不说了,比如sourvenir...
匆匆忙忙容易出错哈。指出问题不等于不尊重他人。
试译：
Would you please write a few words to encourage me ?
I have always wanted to learn English well， for I like English songs very much, but my performance in English is not so satisfactory. So I am writing to you in the hope of having your encouragement and blessing. And please let me have your autogragh as a souvenir，ok?
其他2位的不说了。
May I ask you to write some words to encourage me?I want to learn English well all along,for I love English songs most.But I always have poor marks in English.I hope to get your encoragement and wishes with your signature on it.I'll keep it forever.Is it OK?
Could you write a few sentences to encourage me? For a long time, i always wanted to learn English, because i relaly like English songs, but my marks for English is always low, so i want to hear your encouragement and inspiration, and could you give me an autograph? I will keep it as a sourvenir, is it fine with you?
Could I ask you for some words which are to encourage me?I always want to learn English well ,because I like English songs very much.But my English is very bad.So I want to have your encouragement and good wishes,with your name signed on,I will keep them well for ever,may I?