达内童程童美厦门:懂英语的大哥哥大姐请来！ 拜托

Hello everybody My name is Eva ! This name is very interesting Because it is a name of good

girl! Hehe Next , I am 14 years old , I know that many parters’ ages are

less than mine ! But I must study English hard! My school is The middle School attached

to Xi’an Jiao Tong Univercity! it is a very good school I think in my hurt！！ Oh! My favorite is playing

badminton (,it could become thinner than me , now Oh it maybe become a interesting

reason!你想表达什么？) My family is very happy I love mother rand father Because they send to me love !!

I am living in an apartment with my parents ！！ It’s too big！！ I enjoy myself! I have many brothers and They like me very much !!
This is my short introduction! I hope that pretty ladies and handsome gentlemens

give me a good grade !!
At last,my English isn't the best,but I will be the better with my hard work!For I hope our chinese can't go out for the language reason!!
希望好好学习，你的基础很好，以后有问题可以问我，我在上大学
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上边的翻译有问题,就像流水帐一样.翻译英文哪能像中文一样呢.
希望修改一下再用.

This name is very interesting Because it is a name of (这里漏了一个a) good girl

I am 14 years old , I know many parters’ ages is（改成are） less than mine
其实这句最好改成I know many parters are younger than me.这样比较通顺

So I must study hard to study English（天哪两个study）最好改成So I must study hard in English.

it is a very good school I think in my hurt（in my hurt?你的意思是我心目中吗？那是in my heart）

My favorite is playing

badminton it could become thinner than me .now Oh maybe it could be a interesting

reason!（My favourite sports is badminton because it can make me thinner.Oh maybe it's an interesting reason.）

My family are very happy I love mother rand father Because they send me love !!
(My family are very happy and I love both my father and my mother because they send me love)

I have mang(many?) brothers

At last 虽然我的英语不会是最好的但我会努力做到更好 因为我不希望让中国人因为语言而不能走向世界！
At last, though my English won't be the best, I will try my best to be better because I don't want to see that Chinese people cannot go out in the world because of the weakness of English.