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Nowadays, with the development of tourist industry, the top university campus are becoming a new hot tourist attraction. Different people have different opinions about whether the university campus should be open to tourists.
Some people hold the view that the university campus should be open to tourists for at least 2 reasons. For one thing, the income of entrance tickets can beautify the university`s enviroment. For another thing, the university`s culture which have both an ancient civilization and advanced science and technology.
Nevertheless, quite a lot people are against the view. At first, tourists who left the rubbish may destory the university`s enviroment. In addition, the nomal lives and studies of students will be disturbed.
Well goes an old saying: every coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, the university campus shoule be open to tourists in vacation will solve the problem.
感觉还可以,有些句子欠精练,我只改了一小部分,供参考~~~.
Should university campuses be open to tourists
Nowadays, with the development of travelling,top university campuses are becoming new hot tourist attractions. Different people have different ideas of whether the university campus should be open to tourists.
Some people think that the university campus should be open to tourists for at least 2 reasons. On one hand, the income of entrance tickets can beautify the university`s enviroment. On the other hand, the culture of the university has ancient civilization and advanced science and technology.
Nevertheless, quite a lot people are against that. First, the rubbish which the tourists left may harm the enviroment of university .In addition, the nomal life and study of students will be disturbed by the tourists.
As an old saying goes well: every coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, the university campuses shoule be open to the tourists in vacation. The problems will be solved.
()是我改了什麼.
有些地方文法错了, 有些没错. 可以一般都不会这样说, 因为看起了怪怪的很不自然.
*Should the university campus be open(ed) to tourists
*Nowadays, with the development of (the)tourist industry, top university campus (becomes)这字一般不会用进行式,不然就变成"它正在变", 会很奇怪. a new hot tourist attraction.
*Different people have different opinions about whether the university campus should be open(ed) to tourists.
Some people hold the view that (把the删了, 因为the是指明单单那一个, 可是你现在的university campus是指普遍的)university campus should be
open(ed) to tourists for at least 2 reasons.
(First of all) , the entrance fee(入场费) can be (spent on beautification of the university enviroment.)你本来那句是说入场费可以美化大学环境, 可以入场费是死物啊.
(Secondly), the university`s culture (has) both an ancient civilization and advanced science and technology.
Nevertheless, quite a lot people are against the view. (Firstly), tourists who left the rubbish may destory the university`s enviroment. In addition, the nomal lives and (study environment) of students will be disturbed.
Well goes the old saying: every coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, (having the university campus open to tourists only in vacation will solve the problem.) 本来那句不大自然.
这不是2005年大学英语四级的命题作文吗？？呵呵。。。