gucci包2017新款豹子:《面朝大海，春暖花开》，有兴趣的朋友进来翻译

Facing the Sea, Enjoying the Spring

From tomorrow on, be a happy man.
Feed horses, chop woods, and visit countries.
From tomorrow on, care for rice and vegetables.
Have a house, facing the sea, enjoying the spring,
and being the flowers.

From tomorrow on, correspond with everyone,
and tell them my happiness.
I will tell'em,
with what the lightening carries.
Name each river and each hill with mild names.

Strangers, for you, I also bless,
for your promising prospect,
for your love,
for, under the sun, your felicities.
I, myself, also wish a happiness, facing the sea,
enjoying the spring, and being the flowers.

翻译的不好,这好象是海子的最后作品，我很想表现出他化为泥土永护春的感情，但表现力和渲染力真的达不到水平，献丑了，惭愧..

不是"我也愿面朝大海", 应该是"我只愿面朝大海", 一字之差, 事关重大啊. 有人说这与诗人的自杀有牵连.

[原创翻译]
海子 《面朝大海，春暖花开》
Facing the sea, with blooming flowers around me in this warm spring

从明天起，做个幸福的人
喂马，劈柴，周游世界
从明天起，关心粮食和蔬菜
我有一所房子，面朝大海，春暖花开
From tomorrow on, I would become a happy person
Feeding horses, chopping firewood, traveling around the world
From tomorrow on , I would care about food and vegetables
I would have a house facing the sea
With blooming flowers around it
In this warm spring

从明天起，和每一个亲人通信
告诉他们我的幸福
那幸福的闪电告诉我的
我将告诉每一个人
给每一条河每一座山取一个温暖的名字
From tomorrow on, I would write letters to each of my relatives
To tell them what makes me so happy
I would tell everyone of them
What the lightning of happiness just told me
I would give gentle names to every river and every mountain

陌生人，我也为你祝福
愿你有一个灿烂的前程
愿你有情人终成眷属
愿你在尘世获得幸福
我只愿面朝大海，春暖花开
Hey, stranger! I also would like to bless you
Wish you a brilliant future
Wish you and your lover be together forever!
Wish you find true happiness in this world!
I would rather be sitting there alone facing the sea
With blooming flowers around me
In this warm spring

呵呵
都挺好的。
第一个保留了不少诗的韵味，但是部分翻译的不过正确。
第二个呢，就少了点韵味，不过挺正确的。

另外，我要改下头衔，怎么觉得总监跟？（太监）总管差不多！