迪奥香水玻璃瓶:英语自我介绍

英语自我介绍,主要是介绍自己的个人情况(学习/兴趣爱好/特长)等,这篇不难
的,可以参考下:)~~

Good morning !
I'm very happy to come here to study with you. Now i will introduce myself briefly I am 16 years old,born in ShanHai province .
I spend most of my time on study. and i have acquired basic knowledge of my course during my school time.

This class feels just like a big family to me. I'm interested in sport,pop music.I also enjoy playing games on net.I would love to play with you sometime. I hope I can become your friend soon and make our dreams come true together.

I think I'm a good team player and I'm a person of great honesty to others.

It is promoted that I am good on summer vacation junior middle school, the teacher lets my door be written with one and introduced myself, I am bad in English, hope that the past master aids , can be a little simpler, but don't be too short, not too long either.
I call and know the west Like playing basketball and playing with the computer Like Chinese and sports

Hello,everybody!I`m very honour to intruduce myself.My name is xiao xi,a **year-old (boy/girl),and I like playing basketball and computer,and my favorite subjects are Chinese & PE .As the vivid saying goes, no paid no gain,I`ll work with no effort,and I hope to share my experience with all of you !Thank you !

上面的？应该是I am good at summer vacation.....吧？
后面还有I am bad at....还有好多漏洞啊？？？
像明显的中直接译成英语了！！！