南秀雅苑:[求助]修改英语自我介绍

1.把I am Wangrui改成You can call me wangrui 这样显得你性格活泼

2.原句中的"I'm very happy to come here to study with yours."中的yours 改为you,因为you是单复数同一词,不加s

3."This class feels just like a big family to me."这句话改为This class feels as to be a big family to me .

4."I hope I can become your friend soon and make our dreams come true together."最后这句话改为I appreciate to be your friend soon and we can make our ends meet together .这样改更专业一些,显的你比较有学问.

2.我有两只小猫。他们非常漂亮。一只是黄色的。另一只是白色的。他们非常可爱。黄色的小猫很调皮。他经常到处跑。他最喜欢的游戏是玩球、绳子和石头。而白色的小猫非常温和。她喜欢洗她的脸。并且她不喜欢和人玩。她经常跳上我的膝盖。我喜欢给她洗澡。
噢，我的小猫为我带来了很多愉快。我们是非常好的朋友。我爱他们。
I have got two baby cats. They are very beautiful. One is yellow. The other is white. They are very lovely. The yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He often runs here and there. His favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face. And she doesn′t like to play with people. She often jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.
Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.

Hi ,everyone. nice te meet you.I am wangrui My english name is KAzz. I'm very happy to come here study with you. This class feels just like a big family to me. I'm interested in computer ,pop music.I also enjoy playing games on net.I would like to play with you sometime. I hope we can get together well and make our dreams come true

HELLO BOYS AND MM`S MY NAME IS *** IM 年龄 MY FAVOURITE IS **** IM VERY HAPPY TO**** 瞎遍的还是别看了

Hi ,everyone. I am wangrui My english name is KAzz. I'm very happy to come here to study with you. To me,this class is just a big family.Then, I'm interested in computer ,pop music.I also enjoy playing games on net.Of course,I’d love to play with you sometime. I hope I can be your friend soon and realize our dreams together.GANG BA DAI!!~~