中科新闻网都市逍遥神曾逸下载:帮忙修改这个句子,尤其是时态语法,急!
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多看看语法啊,尤其是中间的动词的时态!!!!!
另一条轴线凡河则以生态保育和教育为主题概念，沿凡河一带的设计将生态元素与景观元素紧密结合，并把当地气候特点，植物分布与人的活动统一在一起考虑，为这一带的整体景观注入了大自然般清新的气息。
for another axes—Fan River, we will take the ecology care and education as our subject concept, integrate ecology elements and landscape elements closely along the Fan River, unify the local climate characteristics, the geographical distribution of plants and human’s activity together, inject the nature fresh breath into the overall landscape of this area..
就是中间的integrate,unify,inject的时态对不对???怎么改???
另一条轴线凡河则以生态保育和教育为主题概念，沿凡河一带的设计将生态元素与景观元素紧密结合，并把当地气候特点，植物分布与人的活动统一在一起考虑，为这一带的整体景观注入了大自然般清新的气息。
for another axes—Fan River, we will take the ecology care and education as our subject concept, integrate ecology elements and landscape elements closely along the Fan River, unify the local climate characteristics, the geographical distribution of plants and human’s activity together, inject the nature fresh breath into the overall landscape of this area..
就是中间的integrate,unify,inject的时态对不对???怎么改???
完全正确，这是一组并列句。你所用到的take，integrate，unify，inject都是作为将来时态助动词will后的并列动词成分，用得很好！不存在语法问题。
我觉得可以这样描述。
unify换成consolidate,combine怎么样？
我觉得你写得很好，用将来时也很对啊！