中科新闻网井盖臭水沟图片:帮我看看这三段英文，修改修改，谢谢
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1. say sth. about computers
Computers are now being used everywhere， in the government，in schools and so on. Soon，computers will be found in every home，too. I think computers are playing an important role in our life and we couldn’t do a lot of things without computer.
2. what do you think of smoking?
I think it's really a bad habit. This habit is bad for people's health. It can even cause some deadly diseases, which are taking so many smokers' lives every year. And many fire accidents are cause by the cigarettes. I hope that we have a world which is no smoking, and we will live will happiness.
3. I sometimes help my parents do housework. I can do the housework which I could do. Just like washing the dishes, sweeping the floor, cleaning the desk, setting the table and so on. I like to do the housework, because they can help me relaxed.
Computers are now being used everywhere， in the government，in schools and so on. Soon，computers will be found in every home，too. I think computers are playing an important role in our life and we couldn’t do a lot of things without computer.
2. what do you think of smoking?
I think it's really a bad habit. This habit is bad for people's health. It can even cause some deadly diseases, which are taking so many smokers' lives every year. And many fire accidents are cause by the cigarettes. I hope that we have a world which is no smoking, and we will live will happiness.
3. I sometimes help my parents do housework. I can do the housework which I could do. Just like washing the dishes, sweeping the floor, cleaning the desk, setting the table and so on. I like to do the housework, because they can help me relaxed.
1:soon改为in a short time
too 去掉 I think computers are playing an important role in our life and we couldn’t do a lot of things without computer. 改为“There is no doubt that comptures are playing a significant role in our life and we can not do many things without it. ”
2:deadly 换为 fatal
are caused
which改为 where there
3：just like改为 such as
because they can help me relaxed.改为“because it can make me relaxed.”
Computers are now being used everywhere,such as the governments, the schools and so on.Computers will be also found in every house.I think computers are playing an important role in our lives and we can't live without computer.
第一段试着改了一下，看看怎么样。