厦工叉车有限公司:一篇英语的短文改错!

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Reading an only be a fun if you except it
to be.If you concentrate in books that somebady
telling you you"ought"to read,you probably
won't have any fun.And if you put down the book
you don't like and try some different ones till you
find one means something to you ,and then relax
with it ,you will almost certain have a good
time-and whether you become ,an a result
of reading,better,wiser,kinder,or gentle,you
will suffer from the process.
每行都有一个错误,只有一行没有
这个应该怎么该啊????
不好意思啊,倒数第三行的an改成as是我打错了@_@
真是不好意思啊 !!!!

Reading (an) only be a fun if you except it
to be.If you concentrate in books that someb(o)dy
tell(ing) you you"ought"to read,you probably
won't have any fun.(换But因为是转折关系) if you put down the book
you don't like and try some different ones.(Till) you
find one(加which少从句引导词) means something to you ,and then relax
with it ,you will almost (certain删) have a good
time-and whether you become ,(as) a result
of reading,better,wiser,kinder,or(more)gentle,you
will (enjoy这篇文章说的是阅读的好处,结尾来个suffer from也太离谱了,所以该改成享受) the process

Reading (an) only be a fun if you except it
to be.If you concentrate in books that someb(a)dy
tell(ing) you you"ought"to read,you probably
won't have any fun.And if you put down the book
you don't like and try some different ones ()till you
find one means something to you ,and then relax
with it ,you will almost certain have a good
time-and whether you become ,an a result
of reading,better,wiser,kinder,or gentle,you
will suffer from the process.
每行都有一个错误,只有一行没有
这个应该怎么该啊????

我把我知道的地方给你说说.直接在上面改了哦.Reading <an>去掉 only be a fun if you except it
to be.If you concentrate <in >换成on books that somebady
<telling >tell you you"ought"to read,you probably
won't have any fun.And if you put down the book
you don't like and try some different ones till you
find one means something to you ,and then relax
with it ,you will <almost >去掉 certain have a good
time-and whether you become ,<an>as a result
of reading,better,wiser,kinder,<or >and gentle,you
will suffer from the process. 有的地方我也不会.