侯一壶老酒回回头:请大家修改一篇英语日记

I hope I have much great fun in tomorrow，in去掉

In tomorrow，in去掉

I am add one year old x
I'm older than before.

I'm a 12-year-old boy x
I will be a 12-year-old boy.

I have to change friendly,change be obediend,change diligent x
I have to change (to be more) friendly,obedient and diligent.

Give up few worry for my mother. x
Lessen worries of mother's.

wait and see等着瞧X
you can wait and seex
you will see it.

that's very good day ---->it will be a very good day.
I hope I have--->I hope I will have
In tomorrow,I am add one year old .--->I will one year older tomorrow.
I have to change friendly,---> I will change to be frendly to other people
change be obediend,change diligent.---> change to be obediend and diligent.
Give up few worry for my mother.-->Cut a few worry to my mother.
在LZ基础上改的.虽然英语用得不地道,不过能看得出LZ是个孝顺的好孩子呢!

Tomorrow is my birthday.I think that will be a very good day.I hope I'll have much great fun tomorrow.
Tomorrow,I'll be one year older ,I'm a 12-year-old boy.I have to change to be friendly,to be obediend,to be diligent.Lessen worries of my mother's.
Mother,you can wait and see what I'll do and I'll be!

明天是我的生日，我想那是非常好的一天。我希望我明天有很多的乐趣。在明天，我又大了一岁。我是一个12岁的男孩了。我需要变的更友好，变得（这个不知道），变得不一样。让我妈妈不再担心我。
妈妈，你等着看。

大概就这样

Tomorrow is my birthday.I think that's a very good day.I hope I can have great fun tomorrow.
Tomorrow, I will be one year older. That is to say, I'll be a 12-year-old boy. I want to be more friendly, obedient, and diligent so as to relief my mother of worry.
Mother, I will not let you down!

Tomorrow is my birthday.I hope that can be a very good day and I will have much fun tomorrow.
Tomorrow,I will be one year old more,a 12-year-old boy.I have to change to be friendly,obedient and diligent.Don't let my mother worry me any more.
My dear Mother,you can wait and see it!