中科新闻网陈汉典和陈妍希吻戏:给改下错误
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my QQ,there people were chatting in English,I tried
to chat with some of them.To my surprised,I found
the oral English of some junior students were getter
than me. I asked them for advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ.But every day after that I
would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ
Day by day I learned from many useful words and
epressions.With time went by ,I found that I could
even communicate some college students freely
有少词的，有多词的，有不正确时态的，也有正确的（就1行）
其他每行都有错，只有一个，拜托了
第1行 in--on
第2行 正确
第3行 to my surprise
第4行 were--was (getter是你自己打错的吧 是better)
第5行 advice--advices
第6行 But--Then
第7行 practising
第8行 去掉from
第9行 went--going
第10行 communicate后加with
我自己做的 不一定对 呵呵
1.in 改为on
2.对的
3.surprised 改为surprise
4.better
5.me 改为mine
6.but 改为So
7.practise 改为practising
8.删from
9.went 改为going 或者把with 改为As
10.communicate 后面加with
1.in-on
2.there-where
3.surprised-surprise
4.对
5.told-ask
6.But-So
7.practise-practising
8.删掉from
9.went-going
10.some-with some
One day I found a chatroom in my QQ. There were people chatting in english and I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found that the oral English ability of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice (as to how to improve my english) and they told me to practice more on QQ. Every day since, I would spend one hour daily to practice my roal English on QQ. Day after day, I learnt more useful words and expression. After sometimes, I realised that I could now freely communicate with college students.
One day I found a chatroom in my QQ. There were people chatting in english and I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found that the oral English ability of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice (as to how to improve my english) and they told me to practice more on QQ. Every day since, I would spend one hour daily to practice my roal English on QQ. Day after day, I learnt more useful words and expression. After sometimes, I realised that I could now freely communicate with college students.