独孤天下改编哪个小说:翻译young for you大家看看我的翻译问题

Sunday's coming i wanna drive my car 星期天来临了 我要开着我的汽车

to your apartment with present like a star 到你的公寓````
forecaster said the weather may be rainy hard 预报员说可能下雨
but i know the sun will shine for us 但是我知道阳光将会照耀我们的

oh lazy seagull fly me from the dark 欧`懒惰的海鸥从黄昏飞跃
i dress my jeans and feed my monkey banana 我穿这我的牛仔裤 给我的猴子喂香蕉吃
then i think my age how old,skyline how far 然后我想我的年龄好大，地平线好遥远
or we need each other in california 或许我门需要其他的在加洲

*you show me your body before night comes down 在黄海来临之前你给我你的
i touch your face and promise to stay ever young
on this ivory beach we kissed so long
it seems that the passion's never gone

*you sing me your melody and i feel so please
i want you to want me to keep your dream 我想你想我继续做你的梦
together we'll run wild by a summer symphony
this is what we enjoyed not a fantasy