中科新闻网李钟硕w剧照淋雨:英语作文问题2
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social Activities and our study
There are a lot of beneficial things in social activities. For example ,we can get some social experiences from social practice. As a college student, we can know about the society and it is easy to adapt ourselves to the society before we graduate.
However ,the social activities are also cause a lot of disadvantages. If you spent a lot of time on social activities, you will never be able to a good command of knowledge. Therefore ,we will fail to be qualified students .
In my opinion, the college students are need to take part in the social activities, but we should do it in our spare time. Thus ,we can not only learn to knowledge in school .but also benefit us in social activities.
请好心人帮忙看看这段话,有什么语法错误或者其他问题都可以指正出来.我将万分感谢.
There are a lot of beneficial things in social activities. For example ,we can get some social experiences from social practice. As a college student, we can know about the society and it is easy to adapt ourselves to the society before we graduate.
However ,the social activities are also cause a lot of disadvantages. If you spent a lot of time on social activities, you will never be able to a good command of knowledge. Therefore ,we will fail to be qualified students .
In my opinion, the college students are need to take part in the social activities, but we should do it in our spare time. Thus ,we can not only learn to knowledge in school .but also benefit us in social activities.
请好心人帮忙看看这段话,有什么语法错误或者其他问题都可以指正出来.我将万分感谢.
社会活动和我们的研究那里是很多有利事在社会活动。例如,we 可能得到一些社会经验从社会实践。作为大学生, 我们能知道关于社会并且它容易适应自己社会在我们毕业之前。但是, 社会活动并且是起因很多不利。如果您在社会活动上很多时间花费了, 您从未能对知识一个好命令。所以,we 无法是合格的学生。以我所见, 大学生是需要在社会活动参与, 但我们应该做它在我们的业余时间。因而,we 可能不仅学会对知识在学校but 并且有益于我们在社会活动。
是这个意思吧
挺好的
我没看出错误来
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