关于红军长征的简笔画:请问一下这个句子对不对!

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A manage of a company in Lanzhou said they have been given out the inforation of employment for 10 days,durning which only had
7 graduates consulted them.
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tiny error:
A manage(r) of a company in Lanzhou said they have(had)(been) given out the inforation(information) of employment for 10 days,durning which only had
7 graduates consulted them.

8对,
A manage of a company in Lanzhou said they have (had)been(去掉) given out the inforation (拼写有误)of employment for 10 days,durning which only had 7 graduates consulted them从句主谓顺序需调整

Better version:A manager of a company in Lanzhou said they had given out the information of employment for 10 days,during which only 7 graduates had consulted them.