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How to Get on Well with Our Classmates
The harmonious environment is very important to us.So we should get on well with our classmates.
We should treat others in sincere manners.Then we can get understand and trust from other side.
When the conflict happened we should forgive each other,we can get along very well together.
If everyone can be more lonient,we can be more friendly.

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Then we can get understand and trust from other side
可以改为
Then we can be understood and trusted by others
我们被理解、被信任

we can get along very well together
前面不应是“,” 大写We
或是“As a result,we can get along very well together”

写得挺好的~