中科新闻网秋高气爽 一段话:这篇英语文章中都有什么语法错误？
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People! Please believe me. I have enough experiences to run the president of student council, even principle of the school! I am the president of Chess Club right now. “Commercial time, there are Chess Club meetings every Monday, Wednesday and Friday during lunch in room 209.” Also, I was an assistant in night school for one semester. I got great credit from teachers and students. Therefore, I am the expert of leadership.
In my personal view, I hate racism. I believe that everybody is equal. No matter where are you come from, your skin colours, tall or short, male female or homosexual. You are equal. If I become the president, I will unite everybody to destroy racism in our lovely school. I believe if we unite together we can accomplish every problems that we face. Unity, unity and more unity!!! Like in the song- Internationale. “So come brothers and sisters. Let’s carry the struggles on. The Internationale unites the world in song. The international ideal unites the human rights.” I respect the human rights and democracy too. Don’t think I am the president and I am different. I am human being as well, not a monster.
As you can see, I love you! So do not afraid to communicate with me. If you get great ideas, welcome to tell me. I won’t eat you. I’ll consider every suggestion that makes our people better life. If you get problems, welcome to tell me. The problem solving is my best advantage.
People! Please vote me. It’s actually vote yourself, because I am the only one who represent you! “For the people!!” (Pause) I am the only one who really loves you! (Pause) Don’t crying if I lose the election. I’ll be with you when you need help. However, I believe in the people who are listening to me. It is inevitable that I will win! Long live the people in our school!!! (claps)
Good morning brothers and sisters. At this great moment, I would like to introduce myself. My name is xxx.The friends who sit down here must know my famous quote, “For the people!” When I first came to GSH, I knew that it is the people who created the society. This is the same in our school. you guys have made it a better place.GSH now enjoys a good reputation. “Long live GSH, long live people!” I’ll do my best for our school and for my people with my duty and glory.
People! Please believe me. I have great experiences to run the president of student council, even principle of the school! I am the president of Chess Club right now. “Commercial time, there are Chess Club meetings every Monday, Wednesday and Friday during lunch in room 209.” Also, I was an assistant in night school for one semester. I got great compliments from the teachers as well as from the students. I have given lavishly of my time and effort.My sincerity and integrity have proved that I am fit to be a leader.
In my personal view, I hate racism. I believe that everybody is equal. It doesn't matter where you come from, what color your skin is, whether you are tall or short, male or female, no matter what your sexual preferences are, you are just equal! If I become the president, I will unite everybody to destroy racism in our lovely school. I believe if we unite together we will accomplish every task that we face. Unity, unity and more unity!!! Like in the song- Internationale. “So come brothers and sisters. Let’s carry the struggles on. The Internationale unites the world in song. The international ideal unites the human rights.” I respect the human rights and democracy too. Please don’t treat the president differently.A president is a human being as well, not a monster.
As you can see, I love you! So don't be afraid to communicate with me. If you have any great ideas, you are welcome to tell me anytime. I won’t eat you. I’ll consider every suggestion that is for the best interest of the people of our school. If you have any problems, don't hesitate to tell me,either. I am a great problem solver.
People! Please cast your vote for me ! It’s actually a vote for yourself, because I am the only one who represents you! “For the people!!” (Pause) I am the only one who really loves you! (Pause) Don’t feel bad if I lose the election. I’ll be with you whenever you need help. However, I believe in the people who are listening to me right now. I have my confidence in you guys.(point to the audience) I will win! Long live the people of GSH!Let's go GSH!!! (claps
很激昂,很振奋人心.我都被感染了唉.你写得很好的.主要是有具体的内容.语言上我做了些小改动,主要是把句子变得流畅点.希望你不要介意.
祝你成功!
Good morning brothers and sisters. During this great moment, I would like to introduce myself. My name is xxx.The friends who sit there and know me well must also know my famous phrase; “For the people!” When I came to GSH, I noticed and understood that people create the society. Same thing here, you guys created our school which has a great and proud name; GSH. “Long live GSH, long live THE people!” I’ll do my best for our school and my people with my duty and glory.
People! Please believe me. I have enough experiences to run the president of the student council and even the principle of the school! I am also the president (captain is better) of the Chess Club. “Commercial time, there are Chess Club meetings every Monday, Wednesday and Friday lunch time in room 209.” Also, I was an assistant in night school (after school club) for one semester. I got great credit from the teachers and students. Therefore, I am the expert of leadership.
Personally, I hate racism. I believe that everybody is equal. No matter where you come from, what your skin colours are, tall or short, male or female, heterosexualor homosexual. You are all equal. If I become the president, I will unite everybody to eliminate (destroy is too power - not very good at here) racism from our superb school (use of alliteration here to emphasis the point that school is good). I believe if we unite together we can accomplish every problems that we face. Unity, unity and more unity!!! Like in the song- Internationale. “So come brothers and sisters. Let’s carry the struggles on. The Internationale unites the world in song. The international ideal unites the human rights.” I respect the human rights and democracy too. *(Don’t think I am the president and I am different. I am human being as well, not a monster. )* - 不知道你想说什么,最好把这句话提出来.
As you can see, I love you! So do notbe afraid to communicate with me. If you got great ideas, you are welcome to tell me. (I won’t eat you.) -虽然可也但是'我不会吃你 最好不要这句话,不然太你的文章会变得没有说服力了. I’ll consider every suggestion that will make our life better. If you have problems, you are more than pleased to tell me. The problem solving has always being one of my talent.
People! Please vote for me. Vote for your say, because I am the only one who will represent you! “For the people!!” (Pause) I am the only one who really understand you! (Pause) I’ll be with you when you need help. Finally I believe in you all, so vote for me. Long live the people in our school!!!
(the people who are listening to me. It is inevitable that i win) - 不要说这个, 不然的话,你也在 discrinminate 那些不在听你的人. 呵呵.
我在英国读书, 也写过一些这样的文章, 我把一些部分删掉了,因为假如你要是放进去的话,听起来有点孩子气,也没有说服力