施华洛世奇男士手表:上次翻译的东西,有点改动,请大家给完善一下.谢谢~

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上次翻译的稿件如下:
[媒体作为核心的信息传递工具,对企业与市场的沟通起着至关重要的作用。以网络和数字化为标志的新媒体时代,把企业媒体组合战略扩展到了更深广的层面。本文综合新时期学术界对新媒体在传媒和经济领域中作用的探讨,结合产业经济学的相关理论和知识,对新媒体的内涵和特点进行了分析。根据学术界对新媒体的定义,归纳了比较常见的新媒体类型。在新媒体的背景之下,本文对企业媒体组合战略制定的各个方面进行了比较全面地分析。在对新媒体组合所需条件分析的同时,引出了对新时期媒体组合战略的重新思考,探讨新媒体时代企业媒体组合的可行性策略,同时对新媒体整合的注意事项以及整合效果的评估标准进行了论述。文章最后结合“蒙牛•超女”媒体组合运用的成功案例,具体分析新媒体组合的实际运用。]

上次采纳的答案如下:
As an essential carrier of information transmission, the mass media plays a crucial role in the communication between business and market. The so-called Age of New Media characterized by network and digitization, promotes the business-media ties strategies to an even deeper level. Integrating the concurrent academic opinions on new media's contribution to the economy, the author makes an analysis of the connotation and commercial features of new media based on the knowledge of industrial economics and common economics analysis models, and sums up several forms of new media according to its commonly accepted definition. Then the author analyzes various aspects of business-market ties strategies, introduces new ideas on this strategy while studying traditional practices, and discusses some feasible norms as well as strategies to be adopted during different phases of product development. Meanwhile, some evaluation standards of media selection and combination are also advanced.
大家最好能在这个翻译稿件的基础之上进行完善补充,谢谢了~
比较着急,希望大家能帮忙~
我的意思是让大家把中文翻译成英语
不是把英语翻成中文
希望大家不要误会了~~~

我是分句改的,括号里是我的译法。

As an essential carrier of (tool for) information transmission, the mass media plays a crucial role in ( + facilitating) communication between business ( “companies” is better here) and market.

The so-called Age of New Media characterized by network and digitization, promotes the business-media ties strategies to an even deeper level. (In the Age of New Media characterized by networking and digitization, the strategic cooperation between companies and the media has reached a higher level on a larger scale.)

Integrating the concurrent academic opinions on new media's contribution to the economy, the author makes an analysis of the connotation and commercial features of new media based on the knowledge of industrial economics and common economics analysis models,
(based on the current research on how the New Media could impact the mass media ans economy, together with relevant theories and knowledge of industrial economics, this essay gives an analysis of the composition and characteristics of the New Media)

and sums up several forms of new media according to its commonly accepted definition.
(Based on the present definition of the New Media, an outline of types of the New Media that are commonly seen is given.)

author analyzes various aspects of business-market ties strategies, introduces new ideas on this strategy while studying traditional practices, and discusses some feasible norms as well as strategies to be adopted during different phases of product development. Meanwhile, some evaluation standards of media selection and combination are also advanced
(In view of the emerging New Media, this essay offers a thorough analysis of various aspects of the strategy-making for company-media team-up. Apart from the necessary conditions of a company-media team-up, this essay also introduces some new ideas and feasible strategies for a company-media team-up in the Age of New Media as well as illustrates pitfalls in the integration of the New Media and evaluation criteria for the integration. The essay ends with a case study of the successful Mongolian Cow- Super Voice team-up and analyses its application in details.

As an essential carrier of information transmission, the mass media plays a crucial role in the communication between business and market. In the so-called Age of New Media characterized by network and digitization, the business-media combination strategies have been extended to a deeper and wider level.
Integrating the academic studies on new media's role in the new era economy and using the theories and knowleges related to the production economy, this article analyses the internal significance and characteristics of the new media. It also induces the common types of the new media according to the definitions of the new media by the academic circles.
In the background of the new media, this article presents a comprehensive analysis in various aspects of the formulation of the combination strategies of business and media. Along with the analysis of the necessary conditions for the new media combination, this article leads to the reconsideration of the combination strtegies of the new era media, investigates the feasible strategy of the business and media combination in the new era, and discusses the matters needing attention in the new media combination and the standards to evaluate the combination effectiveness. At last, the article gives concrete analysis of the real applications of the new media combination by using the successful case of the "Mengniu•Supergirl" media combination.

Mass media plays a crucial role in the communication between companies and market as an essential carrier of information transmission. The Age of New Media characterized by internet and digitalization promotes the company-media cooperation strategy to a deeper level.

[ The medium be the information of the core to deliver the tool, rising to the communication of the business enterprise and market to go to close the important function.Change into the new medium ages of marking with the network and numeral, combine the strategy to the business enterprise medium to expand to the more deep wide level.Comprehensive new period academic circles of this text the study of the function in media and economic realms to the new medium, combine the related theories and knowledges of the industry economics, carried on the analysis to new content and characteristicses of the mediums.According to academic circles to the definition of the new medium, induced more familiar new medium type.Under the background of the new medium, this text combines each one of the strategic establishment to carry on to the business enterprise medium to analyze more and completely.At the time of combining the condition analysis needed to the new medium, derivation combine to the new period medium strategic re- consider, the possibility strategy that the business enterprise medium of ages of new medium of study combine, carried on the treatise to new valuation standard of the regulation and integration result that medium integrate at the same time.The article combine finally" receive the cow?Super woman" the medium combine the successful case example of the usage, concrete analytical new actual usage that medium combination.]

只要两分

As an essential carrier of information transmission, the mass media plays a crucial role in the communication between business and market. In the so-called Age of New Media characterized by network and digitization, the business-media combination strategies have been extended to a deeper and wider level.
Integrating the academic studies on new media's role in the new era economy and using the theories and knowleges related to the production economy, this article analyses the internal significance and characteristics of the new media. It also induces the common types of the new media according to the definitions of the new media by the academic circles.
In the background of the new media, this article presents a comprehensive analysis in various aspects of the formulation of the combination strategies of business and media. Along with the analysis of the necessary conditions for the new media combination, this article leads to the reconsideration of the combination strtegies of the new era media, investigates the feasible strategy of the business and media combination in the new era, and discusses the matters needing attention in the new media combination and the standards to evaluate the combination effectiveness. At last, the article gives concrete analysis of the real applications of the new media combination by using the successful case of the "蒙牛•超女" media combination.
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