红盟为什么解散:这段英文有那些要修改的.

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I happened to run across her – Ferrai
This was a special April . I am always love cars . Especially sport cars .They all have a beauty shape and driving engine in it . So everyone liked . The twelfth of April . One day I happened to see her on the road .She has a pretty red paint . a pair of blue eyes .(light’s color is blue) She was perfect that I think . She was that I've been hunting for car everywhere . I cannot help but love her already . She was so nobler that like a princess , under this reason , We cannot afford the maintenance of Ferrai even if we can buy it . That is a live of luxury .Maybe a man of ability can hold the CAR . They should frame a garage for Ferrari , nobody can hurt she and she will feel safe . So I will study to give it up , because I love her indeed . Ferrai let me know Study and Work must come first , In the near future , I will buy a fit one for me , like double “B”(BENZ and BMW) .
其实我是想写一篇文章,大意是我认识一个女孩,但是我没有希望了,想用隐藏式的文字来告诉她,因为会在班上读出,所以我一定要写好些,高手们,帮帮我吧.我很喜欢jay的一句"我会学着放弃你,是因为我太爱你"...

I happened to run across her - Ferrai

This was a special April. I always loved cars, especially sport cars. They all have a beautiful shape and engine, so everyone liked them. On the twelfth of April, the day i happened to see her on the road. She had a pretty red paint and a pair of blue eyes. She was perfect. She was what i've been looking for everywhere, i cannoy help but to love her. she was noble like a princess, and because of this, we cannoy afford the maintainance of a Ferrai even if we can buy it. That is the life of the rich, maybe a man of ability to keep the car. they should build a garage for ferrari, nobody can hurt her and she will feel safe. so i will learn to give her up, because i love her. ferrai lets me know study can work must come first, in the near future, i will buy one that fits me, like double B

改是可以改, 但是你写的这篇非常不顺。

I happened to run across her – Ferrai
This was a special April . I have always loved cars . Especially sport cars .They all have a beautiful shape and powerful engine in it . So everyone liked . The twelfth of April . One day I happened to see her on the road .She has a pretty red paint . a pair of blue eyes .(light’s color is blue) I think she was perfect . She was that I've been hunting for everywhere . I cannot help but love her. She was so nobler, like a princess , under this reason , We cannot afford the maintenance of Ferrai even if we can buy it . That is a live of luxury .Maybe a man of ability can hold the CAR . They should frame a garage for Ferrari , nobody can hurt her and she will feel safe . So I will study to give it up , because I love her indeed . Ferrai let me know Study and Work must come first , In the near future , I will buy a fit one for me , like double “B”(BENZ and BMW) .