银行担保风险管理:怎样把它们连成一句?

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1. He went abroad. He graduated from university. He looked forward to having a new life.

2. We complied with the local law. We paid a $5 fine. The reason was that we had eaten a bag of peanuts in a public street.

He went abroad after graduation from university, looking forward to having a new life.

After graduated from university he went abroad because of looking forward to having a new life.
We paid a $5 fine for eating a bag of peanuts in a public street so as to comply with the local law

1. Ater he graduated from university, he went abroad to look forward to having a new life.

2. We complied with the local law and paid a $5 fine because we had eaten a bag of peanuts in a public street.

楼上三个合起来差不多。都有错误。
1。 After graduated from university, he went abroad, looking forward to having a new life.
介词短语放前面, 省略 he gradudated from ... 中的he, 因为主语有了,这里不省就重复了。 不用在look forward前加 to, 因为 与后面的to重复了。 直接加逗号,把looking forward ...当状语,修饰主语较好。
第二句 chq0621 翻译得较好。