工作问题及对策:帮我检查一下这几句话有没有写错.

你是写英语作文吧，帮你修改了下
When I was going back home,I saw a child crying at the side of the road. He told me that he couldn't find his mother,and he was too young to tell his address. In order to wait for his mother,I took out my picture book and we read it together. I also told him some interesting stories to make him happy.Half an hour later,he began to cry again.Seeing this,I brought some oranges for him and he liked them very much.At that moment,his mother came in a hurry and thanked me a lot for my kindness.

1. He told me he coundn't find his mother
2. And wait for his mother with him.
3. 30 minutes later,he cried again.
4. After that,his mother came here, and she thanked me .

When I carried my bag to home,I saw a child crying in the steet.
要表达的要点:我背着书包回家,看见一个小孩在路边哭.

He told me that he couldn't find his mother.
要表达的要点:他告诉我他找不到妈妈了.

He is too young to tell his adrees
因为他年龄太小,他说不出他家的地址.

Then I take out a picture book and read with him

I also tell him some stories.
给他讲故事.

And I wait for his mother with him

He was crying again in half hour so that I bought some oranges for him.
半小时后他又哭了,我给他买了写橘子

After that,his mother came here and expressed her gratitude to me.
这时候他妈妈来找他了,并向我表示感谢.

补充一下，如果这几句话，是一段文章的话
我认为，前后的时态应该一致，不要一会用现在时，议会用过去时。

连贯起来的话，可以这么写

When I carried my bag to home, I saw a child crying in the steet. He told me that he couldn't find his mother. And he was too young to tell his address. Therefore, I took out a picture book and read with him. Also, I told some stories to him and waited for his mother with him. However, he was crying again in half hour so that I bought some oranges for him. After that, his mother came and expressed her gratitude to me .

第二句：wasn't find不对啊，应该用couldn't find

第三句最好这样写：He is too young to say where his house is.

第四句：Then I put on the picture book and read it with him.

第五句：story 要变为stories

第六句：改为Waiting for his mother with him 而且这不能成为一个句子，要成为一个句子，必须有主语：我或者其他人。I wait for his mother with him.

第七句：你没有写完啊。I bought some oranges for him. 你写的那两句可以合并，Thirty minutes later he was crying again,

第八句这样翻译：After that his mother came here to look for him and she thanked me.

你要注意时态和语句搭配问题，还需要多努力。只有第一句没有什么问题。

1,When I carried my bag to home,I saw a child crying in the steet.
2, He told me he coundn't find his mother
3, He is too young to say where his house is.

When I carried my bag to home,I saw a child crying in the steet.
要表达的要点:我背着书包回家,看见一个小孩在路边哭.

He told me that he couldn't find his mother.
要表达的要点:他告诉我他找不到妈妈了.

He is too young to tell his adrees
因为他年龄太小,他说不出他家的地址.

Then I take out a picture book and read with him

I also tell him some stories.
给他讲故事.

And I wait for his mother with him

He was crying again in half hour so that I bought some oranges for him.
半小时后他又哭了,我给他买了写橘子

After that,his mother came here and expressed her gratitude to me.
这时候他妈妈来找他了,并向我表示感谢.