湖北中原时代商业:帮忙修改这两句译文

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Last summer vocation I had a trip to the seaside.I tried to find crabs in the sands as soon as reached there.

我想表达:我到海滩的沙滩挖蟹。帮忙完善一下,改成地道些

先谢谢

last summer , i spent my vacation in the beach and tried to get some crabs there

你写得太书面了啦!!!!!!