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The Olympic Games
The Olympic will be held in Beijing two year later.We're all excited because it have never been held in China before .A great many people will cisit Beijing.It's a good opportunity to disseminate Chinese cultures.Most buildings were built in Beijing.And we 're still improving the environment.I think a lot of people want to visit Beijing in 2008.Of course,I also want to make a visit there,because the Olympic Games have great attraction.I hope the OlympicGames will be successful.

The Olympic Games
The Olympic will be held in Beijing in two year's time.We're all excited because they have never been held before in China.Great many people will be visiting Beijing.It's a good opportunity to disseminate Chinese cultures.Most buildings were built in Beijing.And we 're still improve the environment.I think a lot of people want to visit Beijing in 2008.Of course,I also want to visit.Because the Olympic Games have great attraction.I hope the OlympicGames will be succeed.
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The Olympic Games
The Olympic will be held in Beijing two year later.We're all excited because it have never been held in China before .A great many people will cisit Beijing.It's a good opportunity to disseminate Chinese cultures.Most buildings were built in Beijing.And we 're still improving the environment.I think a lot of people want to visit Beijing in 2008.Of course,I also want to make a visit there,because the Olympic Games have great attraction.I hope the OlympicGames will be successful.