中科新闻网瓦尔波莱索:这句话有没有问题啊？？
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f you want to have a look,you may ask me.Or, we may go to Hainan together,for I am always hoping to come to that place again.
你这个句子，从语法上，似乎也没有错误，但是念起来一看就是中国学生写的。不通顺，不地道。
上面的这位一看就是英语高手，写的句子一看就很有水平。但是有的地方似乎写的太有水平，比如Alternatively完全就可以用or呗，后面的revisit，我觉得还不如用again读着有味道。而且开始的if后面，按照他原本的意思，似乎没有want to go这个意思在里面。
所以我觉得-----Please let me know if you want to have a look. Or we may go to Hainan together, for I am always looking forward to visit there agian.
"to come to that place"中的come应该改成go。应该是“去”海南。不过表达上有点生硬。建议改成：
Please let me know if you want to go and have a look. Alternatively, we may be able to go to Hainan together, for I am always looking forward to revisiting there.