美雪艾莉丝教师:有谁能提供为出国留学准备的PS(personal statement) 的范本吗？

出国留学个人陈述书（personal statement）就是表达自己的理想、展示自己的优秀、解释自己的弱点；申请者应该合理地说明自己为什么要选择这个专业、这所学校，令人信服地表明自己符合其录取标准，并展望在这所学校的学习经历对申请者学术和前途的重大意义。
阅读者可以通过这个陈述书了解学生的背景，选择留学专业的动机，选择到该国留学的理由，未来留学时间的安排，职业目标和回国理由，以配合审核学生的其他材料，来决定是否适合这所学习，因此学习陈述书是一份很关键的文件。

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同学您好！
PS 就是personal statement 主要需要体现学生个人的情况 直白点说 就是像美国大学招生官介绍自己的文本。
因为涉及个人隐私，且每个人的个体不同，基本谈不到什么范本了。
需要结合您自身的个人成长经历，学习成绩、荣誉称号等等综合方面来书写。而且要结合您所申请的院校所关心的方面来写更具有说服力。
如果确实对这方面比较迷茫建议来我们官网找专业的咨询顾问了解下

个人觉得你抄是没有用的,因为现在国外的学校都知道总国学生在这方面的"小动作",他们会特别小心地审查这些东西的
不仅不能说要找范文来抄,甚至每个申请的学校都必须各写一篇,因各个学校的情况不尽相同,而PS是针对你的情况来写的,而且同时要结合学校的要求,所以我权你最好是自己写,虽然是麻烦一点,但是这样比较真实,实在.
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不管是一流还是二流大学，这些都是基本的！如果是从中介或学校，可能不需要推荐信，但是personal statement 必写的！

Personal Statement 是写给学校的，其中的内容就要侧重在学术方面，如大学的学术成就，或大学吸引你的独到之处，写出使你选择该校的内在动力，注意尽量要挖掘内容的深度，而非广度，围绕一两个主题，深化你的思想；同时要本着与其他人不同的原则，选择个性化的表达方式，注意不要把自己描绘成“理想”的申请人

下面给你一些资料，给你参考！～

大多数学校都要求申请人提供二至三封推荐信。有力的推荐是录取的重要条件之一。推荐信要客观、公正，切忌流于形式，内容空洞，要与申请人的其它材料(如成绩单)等相符。推荐信也应注意格式、文法等。推荐信的格式与一般书信基本相同。有信头、发信日期、收信人姓名、称呼、正文、信尾谦称、签名、推荐人姓名、职称及工作单位等部分。但推荐信还应着重以下方面：

1.为了便于校方查阅，必须提到被推荐者的全名。推荐者的身份不重要，当然你要是请院士来写也不错，但最关键是要说服招生委员会相信推荐人是真正了解被推荐人的。

2.必须交待与被推荐者的认识期间(何时开始认识或认识多久)，认识程度(偶尔见面或密切接触)及关系(师生关系，上下级关系，同事等)。

3.对被推荐者的优点介绍及评价，这是推荐信的核心。主要包括被推荐者的天赋，学习成绩，研究能力，工作经验，学习精神，组织能力，品行及个性方面。注意说辞应与其他申请材料如成绩单、获奖证书等相呼应，不要出现矛盾而使人误会。人无完人，所以同时也应提及其缺点，以做到公正客观。最好通过实例说明。教授们要的不是完人，而只是学生，一个普通但足够优秀的学生。

4.必须表明推荐人的态度，是极力推荐还是有保留地推荐。

5.最好要求推荐人在信封封口处签名，以确保其真实性。最好在“是否保留日后审阅推荐信的权利”一栏填“NO”。

6.最后别图省事，除非对方明文要求与申请一起寄。否则推荐信应分开寄出。

一些学校出于各种原因，设计了推荐表格，由推荐人填写，但其主要内容也和推荐信涉及的相同。

举例：（仅供参考）！！！

－－－－－留学英国申请 ：大学教授推荐信－－－－－

October 9 2000

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am pleased to write this letter in recommending my favorite student Mr. xxxx, who graduated from this College in July of 1995, for admission into the graduate program at your university.

I have known Mr. xxxx since 1993, when he enrolled in my course of “Computer Analysis of Structure” and “Civil Engineering English”. In my “Computer Analysis of Structure” course, Mr. xxxx got a very good score of 83/100 and ranked within top 5% of the class. Comparing to other students, Mr. xxxx ‘s eyesight is much wider and he does not limit himself in the construction market of China only. Therefore, he paid a lot attention on English and he is one of the two students who passed the “CET-6” English test in our department in the year of 1994. The “CET-6” English test is the highest-level English test in China for the students whose major is not English. Because of his outstanding performance in college, when he graduated in 1995 Mr. Xxx was chosen by XXXX, the largest construction company in China and also one of the 225 world’s top international contractors, to work in its oversea office of xxxxx City.

As a teacher for more than 30 years, I think that Mr. xxxx is one of my best students. During his study with me in three semesters, I found that Mr. xxxx has very balanced knowledge, he not only has a very strong analysis ability in the science and engineering problems but also has very deep understanding on the social problems. He impressed me with his unique and penetrating ideas in our class speech.

I am very glad when Mr. xxxx told me he would like to pursue advanced studies in construction management. I am sure that he will become a good student in your esteemed university. Should you need any further information about Mr. xxxx, please do not hesitate contact me.

Yours sincerely

Ms. xxxxx
Professor in Civil Engineering Department
xxxxx Architecture College
131# xxxx Road
xxxxxx District
xxxxg City 0000000
P.R.China

举例：（仅供参考）！！！

－－－－－－留学英国申请 ：PERSONAL STATEMENT－－－－－

PERSONAL STATEMENT

Born in 1973 to a peasant family near Beijing, I have overcome many life obstacles to be where I am. Currently I am the xxxxx company's (xxx) deputy contract manager of an international project - a landmark building named xxxxxx - in xxxxx City, xxxxx. The xxxx company is the most famous contractor in china and also one of the top 225 international contractors in the world. At the age of 27, I have worked overseas for more than five years, completed four international projects, and save enough money all by myself to support my further studies in western country. With my extensive experience in the construction field, I am confident that I can be a worthy and valued student to your institution of higher learning.

Looking back on my life, I must first thank my loving father. Without my father's support, encouragement, and guidance, I might not have left my village, not to mention working abroad. My father's dream of entering the university was shattered by the chaotic Cultural Revolution when he was a high school student. From the day that I was born, he hoped that I could fulfill the dream he had of becoming the first university student in our family. However, I was unruly as child. In my first two years of primary school, my school report was horrific. In the third year, my father used his evening time to teach me by himself. I clearly remember during that time I was forced to study up to 11 o'clock every evening and was not allowed to watch TV and movies. When I became sleepy, I was ordered to wash my face with cold water to stay awake. My father's strict discipline awakened my interest to study. I made great progress in half a year, especially in Mathematics, and became the best student in our class. From that time on, my father never worried about my studies. In the following primary and secondary school years, my excellent academic performance had made me a pride for my family and our village.

In the1992 National University Entrance Examinations, I won acceptance into the xxxxxxx Architecture College, one of the nation's leading higher-education institutions of its kind, to major in Civil Engineering. Soon I realized that Civil Engineering is a very practical knowledge and getting a high score in a test does not mean that you will have potential growth in future jobs. I would rather spend my time to learn something that can really improve my quality than spend them to increase my test score a little. Based on this idea, I didn't give much attention to class study like in high school. On the contrary, I spend most of my free time on reading and learning English. Thus my GPA in College was not exemplary. Making full use of every minute I had, I read a variety of books and journals, through which I broadened my vision and enriched my knowledge. If you have a chance to check the record that I borrowed books from our college library, I guess I should be the one who borrow more books than anyone other. Among my classmates, I am famous for my broad knowledge and in-depth opinion on the social matter, which, I think, come from the accumulation of my widely reading. Besides reading, my other emphasis in college was English. Along with China becoming more and more open and to adopt more international standards, an engineer with poor English ability can not be called a qualified Engineer. Therefore, I read a lot English novels to increase my vocabulary and listened to VOA and BBC nearly every night. I studied English so hard that sometimes I was misunderstood by my classmates. They thought that even I studied English so hard, I maybe never had a chance to use it in my whole life. Indeed among the thousands civil engineer in China, the opportunity of working abroad is quite rare and competitive. Time has proved that my decision is right. In the CET-6 English Test of January 1995 (CET-6 is the highest level English Test in China), I became one of the two students who passed this test in our college. When I graduated in 1995, I was chosen by xxxx company to work in its oversea office in xxxx City, mainly because I was proficient in English.

Up until now, I have worked in xxxxx City for more than five years. During this period, I have completed building four international projects including the xxxx Power Station, the xxxxx International School, the Polluted Water Treatment Factory of xxxxx EPZ, and the xxxxx Plaza, a high-rise building. Playing a very important role, I have learned the most from the Hong Kong- invested xxxxx Plaza Project by being the main catalyst to jump-start the bidding stage in 1997 to preparing the claim report and final account in 2000. As the deputy manager of contract department of Main Contractor (xxxxx), I employed more than 30 qualified subcontractors and suppliers, negotiated and signed more than 50 subcontracts. The 400-plus-page claim report that I produced with assistance from our Italian consultant helped xxxxx company to obtain an additional 1.2 Million USD. Dealing with various company managers from different countries has been the most challenging professional experience I have had. It is also in the xxxxx Plaza where I first saw just how big the differences are between the management in China and those in the developed countries. I admire Mr. xxxx, the Employer's UK-educated Project Manager. His work ethics helps me to understand the meaning of "professionalism", thus my deep interest in studying abroad in the UK. I realized what China needs the most is not capital or technology, but management, and China's development in the Construction Management in the coming decades will surely mirror the Western country's experiences in the past. If I can receive additional advanced training in a prestigious university such as yours, it will not only greatly enhance my career prospects, but it will also help to improve the management of China's construction industry.

Based on the above thinking, my life-long goal in the Civil Industry has changed from being a technology expert to be a professional project manager like Mr. Man. In addition, I also hope to improve my English. In conclusion, I am submitting my application for acceptance into the postgraduate program of MSc in International Construction Project Management of your university.

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