铜壶法师的特点:高手帮我看看,这段话有没有语病

来源:百度文库 编辑:中科新闻网 时间:2024/05/03 04:45:42
The winter in Canada is very long, and it often begins to snow as early as November, and the ice and snow will not melt until April or even May of the next year. During this long perod, it snows much,and the wind is strong, the snowfall of one night can reach 2-3 inches. so in winter here, salt will be spreaded on the ground so that the snow on road will not get frozen.

perod->period
so in winter here.-->So 改为thus,在正规语法里,so/and/but不能用于句子开头

最后一句,你昨天晚上和你昨天晚上说的不太一样,按照他的说法,应该这样比较好:
So in winter here, salts and sands will be spread onto the ground so that the snow on road will not get frozen.
其中spread的过去分词和原形一样。