中科新闻网魁拔奇衡三是什么:一篇初二的小短文,麻烦看看有没有错误....谢谢啦~
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谢谢啦~
Although it’s too late to tell you “Happy New Year”, I believe you are going to be better and better. It’s a pleasure to meet you. In the past two years, I know you help me with many ways. I’m quite happy to become your best student and friend. My pride. Thanks a lot. I miss you forever. I’m not kidding you know.
In a word, a friend is a second self. You enjoy yourself, that’s what I hope.
问题大了
首先，对某人说新年好不能用tell,而是say"happy...."to you .第二，be going to 最好用will,表示一种必然趋势而不是打算（你不是他，不能为人家打算）。第三，I know最好放到时间的前面去，也就是把in the past 2years放到句中，前后用逗号隔开，不然还可以将know改成过去式knew。第四，通过某种方式多用in...way 而很少见with。最后，kidding 和you know
中间最好用逗号隔开，因为后面的是附加成分。
偶是初中英语老师，苛刻了点，但也是为你好，希望你成绩进步！
按楼上说的改就好了。
I know you helpped me in many ways
are going to 应该用will比较好，
It’s a pleasure to meet you.最好是加个我，即It's my pleasure to meet you,或者It's a pleasure to meet you for me.
In the past two years,明明是过去时，后句应该改成I know you had helped me in many ways.way应该与in搭配才对
My pride.是不能在信中单独成句的，你想一下要表达的意思，然后完整地说出来.
I’m not kidding you know. 在you know前面要加逗号
最后一段，self不是可数名词，不能用a second 修饰，最好改成，one's friend is a second oneself.(也不一定对，你非要这么说吗？)
最后一句需要在you后面加个should 之类，不然时态有问题。
I believe you are going to be better and better
I believe you will be better and better会不会好点呢
I know you help me in many ways
My pride. ？？
It's my pride比较好哦
I miss you forever改成
I'll miss you forever
或者 I wll aways miss you
I’m not kidding you know.
改成 I’m not only kidding that you know. 或者有you前加个，
You enjoy yourself, that’s what I hope.
意思是现在过的开心就是我想要的？
那可也可以
以上均个人之见
我只是个高3学生哈
I know you help me with many ways. 一句的时态有问题
I miss you forever.－－I'll miss you forever