中科新闻网德国勃兰特下跪后影响:帮忙看一下有无错误~~~~~~~~~~
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The fish , a very free animal.I consider myself as fish to its freedom. It can be footloose through the sea, and wagging its body at random.
But now, the fish changed, she became more and more lost,and can't find her destination.Who can help her? Oh~~Nobody! Yes,she carryed great pressure. But where is the pressure from? She has no idea as well. God! why does her live so tired? Are you unfair? why is she like this ? Why ? Did it have no answer? She just wanna this thing will pass quickly
..She really doesn't like this feeling. And she really know the most important thing is to face the real first. But you know saying is easier than doing. Well,It is geting worse. Nobody can understand her. She need a helping hand to help her out from the puzzle and let her face the real bravely!! Can she? Can I?
But now, the fish changed, she became more and more lost,and can't find her destination.Who can help her? Oh~~Nobody! Yes,she carryed great pressure. But where is the pressure from? She has no idea as well. God! why does her live so tired? Are you unfair? why is she like this ? Why ? Did it have no answer? She just wanna this thing will pass quickly
..She really doesn't like this feeling. And she really know the most important thing is to face the real first. But you know saying is easier than doing. Well,It is geting worse. Nobody can understand her. She need a helping hand to help her out from the puzzle and let her face the real bravely!! Can she? Can I?
只看了一句：
THE多余。
接下来在a后面应该加上 kind of。
fish不是animal，用creature吧。
只看了第一段，感觉翻译得太生硬，不知所云。
第2句中的TO改为FOR,因为FOR表示陈述理由