泛华集团 史凤玲:英语改错

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When teacher talked about the difference between we judge people at our early age and now,one of my classmates said that ther is not any good people in the world,there are so many so-called good people.

I was shocked about her words,for I always consider her as a very mild person,who is not so intensive as me.If such a person said this,I don't think it is my own fault,it is the social fault.

Everyone should be responsible for this problem.We protect ourselves from not being hurted by ohers,so we say nothing truly to the person who we think will hurt us.

When teacher talked about the difference between how we judge people when we are young and now,one of my classmates said that there is not a single good person in the world but there are many hypocrites.

I was shocked at her words,for I have always consider her as a very mild person,someone who is not as intense as me. If such a person can say this,I don't think it is mine but society's fault.

Everyone should be responsible for this problem.We protect ourselves from being hurt by ohers,so we say nothing true to the person who we think will hurt us.

differences
was were//因为前面是said
there前加but
shocked about改为shocked at
said前加have
my改为her
去掉not
hurted改为hurt
truly改为true