份子吧论坛首页:几道英语翻译题

1、Suddenly she became sad when we ask about her parents.
2、We have determine to start early.
3、The sales volume of personal computers takes off quickly these years.
4、You will be restored before long.
5、This programme shows on the same time every day.
6、Don't talk while eating.
7、The girl said she owed his success to his teacher.
8、What's the matter to the machine?
9、We like she not just for her intelligence, but also for her delight in helping others.

paddy5005同志的语法错误实在是太多了

雪莉Q写得还可以，不过也有一些地方需要改

1.把when去掉，immediately和directly自己就可以引导时间状语从句了，加上when反而搞得四不像

2.把start改成start out或start off，这才是动身的意思
建议把have determined to do改成be determined to do，这时的determined类似于interested，变成半个形容词了

3.这句应该用过去时，时间状语改成during these years

5.这句明显应该用一般现在时，因为表达经常性事件，时间状语也应该改一改
This TV programme shows at the same time of the day.

9.passion后的介词应该是for，凡是表示渴望、愿望的动词或名词，后面的介词一般都是for，如hope for ，desire for等等
另外建议用平行句，不要前面用连词because，后面用介词短语because of，最好统一，而且后面的because of可以省略，这样才不光是正确的句子，还是好句子

我的答案如下：

1. She became upset immediately we asked about her parents.
2. We are determined to start out early
3. The sales volume of personal computers took off quickly during these years
4. You will recover before long
5. This TV programme shows at the same time of the day
6. Don't talk while eating
7. The girl said she owed her success to her teacher
8. What's wrong with the machine?
9. We all like her not just because of her intelligence, but also her passion for helping others

1. She became upset immediately when we asked about her parents.
2. We have determined to start early
3. The sales volume of personal computers has taken off quickly these years
4. You will recover before long
5. This TV programme is showing everyday at the same time
6. Dont talk while eating
7. The girl said she owed her success to her teacher
8. What's wrong with the machine?
9. We all like her not just because she is smart, but also because of her passion in helping others